Doesn't anybody read the NG rules?
This is breaking them.
You aren't aloud to use "Phineas & Ferb" in your Flash.
Go back, read the rules, try again.
Ok, I'll start off with the basics of this. This isn't flash animation. I think we've already established that in the last 7 reviews. Moving on..
It needs a Pause and a Restart button, instead of just going to black at the end.
The sound quality, as in the constant white noise and the popping of the microphone/camera, really takes me away from the movie. The actual video quality isn't all that great either.
The jokes in this, weren't all that original, but they did give me a laugh and they were pretty funny. The main problem with this, is the acting. It was ok at best. I'm not a movie critic or nothing, but I really wasn't believing it. If the acting had been better, the jokes would have hit a lot harder. Even the storytelling part of the video during the actual in-movie wasn't as great, you need to work on timing your pauses and such when you do something like this.
Voltage gave a very great suggestion with the seperate audio idea. That's something I would emphasize for you in your future projects that are going to be posted on New Grounds.
This movie has tons of potential as do you.
-Review Request Club
"Ok, I'll start off with the basics of this. This isn't flash animation. I think we've already established that in the last 7 reviews. Moving on.."
Pause and Restart - Thanks, will add this on future episodes!
Sound quality - I think I know how to fix this now!
Video quality - Not possible to fix in flash :(
Ah, the acting isn't suppose to be amazing. We didn't plan any of this. We just turned the camera on and started talking to each other. We actually weren't acting, we were having a real conversation that we planned on turning into a movie. You can't really say it's bad acting when it's EXACTLY how we act in real life. :P
Thanks, I'm happy you thought it was funny!
Very short and simple. That is a good and a bad thing. I usually like when an animation is short and to the point. Simple animations are also sometimes good. This, however, wasn't as entertaining as could have been. I'll tell you why.
The story/line ideas used in this have been done to death. I feel like I've seen these almost exact lines over and over in different comedy animations. They were funny, but after seeing them so much, they just didn't give me as much of a laugh as they should have. Originality is what this lacks.
The ending lines were probably the funniest and the best part of this as a whole. With that being said, of course, it seemed to end pretty abruptly.. you should have added a few more lines to it and made the ending a little better.
I love how this seems to be a completely random piece of work. I've always been a fan of the random and funny flashes.
I also enjoyed the art in this, the characters, how you drew them, and the outline of each. I really loved the animation overall. It was done very well for a flash animation.
I'd like for you to continue doing animation shorts such as these.
In my humble opinion, everything here, was just PERFECT.
I'll try to give you something to improve on.
You definitely could have matched up the song with the animation a little better, and the texts at the bottom of the screen seemed to change a little too fast.
Other than that, I loved it. I just loved it. You did everything that needed to be done in a piece like this. The background was added in at the perfect time as well.
For future animations, you could try working on adding a little more animation to it. However for this one, nothing else needs to be added. Thank you for this.
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