Diggin it bro.
Just one thing..
The guy's left hand looks like its thriving in pain, while his facial expression almost looks as if hes already dead. You should probably either close his eyes and lay the hand down to make him look dead, or do something like staple his mouth shut but have his eyes drawn huge to show the amount of pain he is in.
Other than that, this was an absolute perfect piece.
Your totally right about that. I never think of things like that! Thanks alot!
Seems a tad simple/elementary for the art portal to me.
I got the concept and enjoyed it actually. The many different colors used in this really brought it all together. The crudeness of it, made it stand-out a lot more in a good way.
However, none of it seemed to be detailed to well, and the items used in this to make the creation are all items you can find in Paint. The background also did not seem to be detailed very well at all. Try researching Internet Painting/Flash and practice it a little more, add more detail and such. Or you could always find real-life stencils and do an actual painting in itself.
This belongs in a Flash more than it should just be a simple picture.
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Thnakyou. Your help is appreciated. Thanks for reviewing.
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